MS location unknown. This excerpt quoted in March-Phillipps, Lanoe Falconer (1915), 184.
[To Mary Elizabeth Hawker]
I endorsed a strong remonstrance in Mothers in Council against English girls marrying Italians, as representing much misery which the author knew only too well to be the consequence, and to adopt a story where this is the happy conclusion seems to me inconsistent. . . But that I know that altering does not answer, and that it would destroy the point of your tale, I should have liked Margaret six years after to have seen her lover fat and unromantic, and the doleful state of an Englishwoman in the Castle of the Sea, and to be very thankful to her good father for his prohibition.1